tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7814811414114530849.post4869572491565592790..comments2011-09-22T08:36:10.950-06:00Comments on The Crow and the Moon: the spring creekWarrenhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/18267847448047212292noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7814811414114530849.post-15091692471438096082011-09-22T08:36:10.950-06:002011-09-22T08:36:10.950-06:00Thank you very much, Adelaide - high compliments f...Thank you very much, Adelaide - high compliments from such a terrific poet - and a master of haiga.<br /><br />--<br /><br />I totally agree with you, Bill - I've made the change and it does indeed sound better. Sometimes I tend to put in highfalutin' phrases that are ill-begotten. Thanks!<br /><br />WarrenWarrenhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/18267847448047212292noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7814811414114530849.post-52869352567654338972011-09-20T12:33:19.886-06:002011-09-20T12:33:19.886-06:00Would "if only" have a more idiomatic fe...Would "if only" have a more idiomatic feel that "but that?" Assuming, of course, that idiomatic is what you want.Billhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10717622168200846486noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7814811414114530849.post-88047001784253514832011-09-20T06:28:51.963-06:002011-09-20T06:28:51.963-06:00a beautiful partnership, photo and haiku.
Adelaid...a beautiful partnership, photo and haiku.<br /><br />AdelaideAdelaidehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01807278813737986532noreply@blogger.com