Saturday, April 13, 2013

gritty wait - haiku

styrofoam coffee
gritty wait for my wife's
medical exam


6 comments:

Bill said...

the doctor wants
to take a closer look
coffee gone cold

Everything turned out fine.

good news
from the doctor
autumn butterfly

Warren said...

Everything's fine, on and off the forum - the tests were negative. I love your haiku - you so good! My mentor. Thanks, Bill.

Warren

Magyar said...

Did-ja know?
__According to a recent TV "medical up-date" if you drink too much coffee from a foam cup... you can get cancer of your ear lobes!

Smiles!

__I'm so glad all is well; your senryu, is a nifty fit! _m

Warren said...

Nah - ain't heard that one - I'll lay off the styrofoam. Thanks for your remarks, my friend.

Warren

polona said...

this captures the tension and the suspense so well... glad it turned out ok.

Warren said...

Thanks Polona - I've mentioned it before and I'll do it again - your poems are wonderfully insightful.

Warren