Thursday, February 28, 2013

scattered

scattered in the wake
of a mallard
the whole damn mountain


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6 comments:

Bill said...

I detect the painter's eye in this one.

Warren said...

It's a terrific visual, when one stops to think about it - hey, thanks for your comments, Bill.

Warren

Adelaide said...

I've been catching up on your posts for the past few days. All are terrific. Scattered and tree-lined road---terrific imagery.

Adelaide

Frank... said...

A very visual haiku filled with a lot of energy. Nice one, Warren...

Warren said...

Hi Adelaide - I was rereading my post to Bill and my comments came across as a bit self-serving. The idea of a mallard's wake and ripples disturbing the mountain that much is terrific, not so much my haiku. But I appreciate your comments, m' dead. Thanks.

Warren

Warren said...

Hi Frank - Almost missed your visit - thanks for your comments. I guess you are right about the energy - "scattered" conveys the energy, huh. Thanks!

Warren