I detect the painter's eye in this one.
It's a terrific visual, when one stops to think about it - hey, thanks for your comments, Bill.Warren
I've been catching up on your posts for the past few days. All are terrific. Scattered and tree-lined road---terrific imagery.Adelaide
A very visual haiku filled with a lot of energy. Nice one, Warren...
Hi Adelaide - I was rereading my post to Bill and my comments came across as a bit self-serving. The idea of a mallard's wake and ripples disturbing the mountain that much is terrific, not so much my haiku. But I appreciate your comments, m' dead. Thanks.Warren
Hi Frank - Almost missed your visit - thanks for your comments. I guess you are right about the energy - "scattered" conveys the energy, huh. Thanks!Warren
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