An unusual but very effective combination of images, Warren...
Powerful and believable.
Amusing...but maybe not to you.Adelaide
Thanks, Frank - hopefully I didn't go overboard with my haiku. I wanted the image to be fairly subtle but still convey my emotions at the time.--Hi Bill - Thanks for your comments - they reinforce what I wanted to convey.Warren
Hi Warren,I left a comment for this a few days ago, but apparently it didn't connect.This is actually funny, but probably not to you. A good senryu. Do you get Modern Haiku? The latest issue has three interesting essays on senryu.Adelaide
Hi Adelaide - I don't think I got your earlier comment but I may have missed it. I'm not lanquishing in sorrow (now) over my divorce - been married 25 years to a wonderful woman, so God has His way of working things out in the lives of His foolish children. I'll check out Modern Haiku - thanks!Warren
how simple it seems, but a whole life is wrapped up in these few tiny words... this is a wonderful haikuthank you very much
Thanks Gabriele - I appreciate your stopping by and your comments!Warren
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