Wednesday, February 1, 2012

sparrow's song

winter dawning
a sparrow's song rises
from the bushes


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9 comments:

Frank... said...

The song rising is wonderful, Warren...

Bill said...

good one, warren. "rises" is a good choice and beautifully placed.

Warren said...

Thanks Frank - Your opinion is valuable to me and I thank you for your thoughts!

Hi Bill - A compliment from a terrific poet - you've made my day.

Warren

Magyar said...

Nice work, Warren, and I can only echo the praise of the -song
rises-. _m

Warren said...

Thanks, Mag - your comments are very much appreciated.

With thanks -

Warren

Adelaide said...

Well done, Warren.

Adelaide

Warren said...

Thank you, Adelaide - I appreciate your stopping by!

Warren

Gillena Cox said...

like your 'winter dawning'


much love...

Warren said...

Thanks Gillena - I'm glad you like that parallel.

Warren