Saturday, November 5, 2011

sparrow's song

even on gloomy
days, the sparrow's song –
warmth of her smile

4 comments:

Anonymous said...

hello, I like this version much better than the first post. I love discovering new poems on your sight. Thanks,Cuz. Fay

Warren said...

Thanks, Cuz Fay - I like the second version better as well - great minds, huh?

Cuz Bud

Magyar said...

The warm brightening of a cold mood,that relationship between the bird song and her smile.
__Fine as always, Warren. _m

Warren said...

Terrific comments, Mag - I always appreciate your readings. Thanks.

War