Sunday, September 18, 2011

the spring creek

3 comments:

Adelaide said...

a beautiful partnership, photo and haiku.

Adelaide

Bill said...

Would "if only" have a more idiomatic feel that "but that?" Assuming, of course, that idiomatic is what you want.

Warren said...

Thank you very much, Adelaide - high compliments from such a terrific poet - and a master of haiga.

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I totally agree with you, Bill - I've made the change and it does indeed sound better. Sometimes I tend to put in highfalutin' phrases that are ill-begotten. Thanks!

Warren