Wednesday, August 3, 2011

honeysuckle scent

humid night
honeysuckle scent from
an open window

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summer moon –
the shimmer
on a quiet lake

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6 comments:

Frank... said...

Two very nice haiku, Warren. In particular I do like the first, which paints a very vivid picture...

Warren said...

Thanks Frank - I shortened up and simplified that one after your original comments. I felt it was a little too wordy.

Warren

Gillena Cox said...

ah; the nuances in observing nature can be so spellbinding

much love...

Warren said...

And so right you are, Gillena - thanks for your comments!

Warren

Adelaide said...

I llike the alliteration in both of these: honeysuckle/humid
summer/shimmer

Lovely summer images.
Adelaide

Warren said...

Thank you Adelaide - I love it whenyou check in with me.

Warren