excellent the haiku and placement 'Water's edge" but i would have liked to see the poem "If he could" should have been placed in the body of the post sort of like a haibun text instead of crowding the photomuch love...
Hi Gillena - I'm not sure I know what you mean on this one. I'm definitely open for critiques and need to know just what you think I should do.Thanks - Warren
each new waveclears the pipers footfallsa broken shellNicely captured image of sea-life, Fay! Warren, briefly the waters purge, fine one! _m
Thanks, Doug - Gorgeous haiku you have there - very lovely!War
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