Monday, June 6, 2011

Water's edge

4 comments:

Gillena Cox said...

excellent the haiku and placement 'Water's edge"

but i would have liked to see the poem "If he could" should have been placed in the body of the post sort of like a haibun text instead of crowding the photo

much love...

Warren said...

Hi Gillena - I'm not sure I know what you mean on this one. I'm definitely open for critiques and need to know just what you think I should do.

Thanks - Warren

Magyar said...

each new wave
clears the pipers footfalls
a broken shell

Nicely captured image of sea-life, Fay!
Warren, briefly the waters purge, fine one! _m

Warren said...

Thanks, Doug - Gorgeous haiku you have there - very lovely!

War