Two very nice haiku. In particular, I like the third line of the first post, 'catches the light - it is very evocative...
perfect zen in words. bravo!
I can "hear" this piece, the sounds of the owl's flight, the breeze, the rustle of that last leaf -- a tremendous delicacy here --
Frank - Thank you very much for your thoughts. You are a terrific poet, so I appreciate your time.Gerry - Thanks for taking the time to read and comment!Kelly - Coming from you, I appreciate your view on my haiku. You are terrific as a poet and author. Thanks!Warren
Both excellent, Warren. "holdout" is a great choice.
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