Tuesday, May 11, 2010

moonrise

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moonrise
a swooping barn owl
catches the light

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spring breeze
a holdout autumn leaf
finally lets go



5 comments:

Frank Williams said...

Two very nice haiku. In particular, I like the third line of the first post, 'catches the light - it is very evocative...

Gerry Boyd said...

perfect zen in words. bravo!

Kelly Marszycki said...

I can "hear" this piece, the sounds of the owl's flight, the breeze, the rustle of that last leaf -- a tremendous delicacy here --

Warren said...

Frank - Thank you very much for your thoughts. You are a terrific poet, so I appreciate your time.

Gerry - Thanks for taking the time to read and comment!

Kelly - Coming from you, I appreciate your view on my haiku. You are terrific as a poet and author. Thanks!

Warren

Bill said...

Both excellent, Warren. "holdout" is a great choice.